Wondering if a few of you kind folks would mind critiquing a sales ad for a hunt horse I'm selling? I don't want to post a link directly as I don't want to violate the no advertising policy, but if a few you are kind enough to reply I will PM you a link to the ad.
Thanks so much everyone! I think I've pm'ed everyone who responded or PM'ed me. I've had a few responses so far, but no one serious and no one has been out to try the mare. I've had the ad up just over a week I think. I have her on equine.com and equinenow.com right now. Don't want to splurge on too many sites that cost alot, but suggestions and prices for other sites would be ok too.
My choices right now are push for the sale, hunt her and get others to hunt her as much as possible (I have another young horse that needs to get out, plus three client's horses to hunt as well :S) OR I pull her shoes, throw her in a client's field and just hack her around for a bit and don't worry so much about selling right now. I can't afford to keep paying board/shoes etc and to clip, blanket, trailer her (and so on) if she doesn't sell
So not a whole lot of feedback actually came back, but basically a diversity of pictures, show the horse doing different things is good. Everyone seemed to like different pictures, including those that showed versatility. All of my pics were in tack, at least tidy if not nicely turned out which probably helped.
Info is good, I have a long-ish add and people said they could tell I loved the horse, was telling the truth and wanted the best for the horse. They felt they knew what they were inquiring on.